Performance Critique: January 8a
Updated: 2012-01-25 13:06:22
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9bJViPByao 0m33s Kiss on the mouth line doesn’t work 1m45s New part got laughs 2m45s Don’t stutter 3m33s Smile during these lines 3m42s Reword the mom line 3m49s And remember my jokes 5m14s Sound happier 7m05s Rework/tighten the Doctor Rosenfeld joke Overall: Decent for a mic